WE LIVE
in the head
of the dead
Art
Air
Birds sing
on
graves
. . .

z.z. 04/06
[was amazed when i saw how much
this painting matches the poem on google]

作舟诗集 发表评论于 2006-05-30 22:33:36

thanks, y.y.! my pleasure to share...as always!!!

your reading is sharp!!

:)

y.y. 发表评论于 2006-05-30 21:56:19

Z.Z.好，开心见到你分享着诗歌：)

感觉这首诗歌的语言尽管简单，但，它不单有语音上的节奏，还有内涵上一轻一重
的间隔，非常有意思。。。喜欢你简单地勾勒表达出一个很“严肃”甚至沉重的主
题。。。喜欢它的DARK。艺术如同空气一样；鸟儿微弱的歌声使得一切过去的，没
落的还充满一线生机。。。

作舟诗集 发表评论于 2006-05-30 20:40:13

thanks, yy!! how are you!!??!!

no, i didn't google the painting until the moment i wanted to post the poem ....

cheers!!

y.y. 发表评论于 2006-05-30 18:46:56

非常喜欢你的“素描”！！！

really? i thought your poem was inspired by the painting!!!
:)

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作舟诗集 (2006-05-30 18:41:09) 评论 (4)

Image of Hung Liu's painting