朝阳

2004-12-01 21:32:53

天边的朝阳是一团火燃烧在一个遥远的地方那烈焰不留痕迹地用炙热把冷冷的夜熔化地上的冰面颊上泛着红光轻轻自语， “不要让我爱上你吧” 微笑着悄悄地化做了水

olivia 发表评论于 2004-12-04 12:04:28

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thanks for reading, and for your piece of variation of the poem.
you are a scientist, aren't you?

olivia 发表评论于 2004-12-03 11:32:38

poems are meaningful, while meaningless.
if it ignites you, i am glad that i have a reader like you.

Thanks.

孤剑独箫 发表评论于 2004-12-03 09:09:01

可否借你的火
照亮远处的黑暗？
可否借你的体热
给孤儿带来温暖？
可否借你的心跳
让失落的灵魂归航？
可否借你的智慧
化苦涩为甘酣？

Olivia 发表评论于 2004-12-02 10:10:58

What do you want the fire for?

孤剑独箫 发表评论于 2004-12-02 08:45:51

遥远的火
能量快用完了
你的灼热
可以借用一下吗？

(玩笑玩笑)

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