《Re-ligion》
one night
at the edge
of the great
water
colors loud
as raging monsoon
in a girl's bosom
starlitness
inflamed
and i
became re-
ligious
looking
at the blue
dome of my
church
my temple
my clan-
house
:2/27/05
影云 发表评论于
thanks, ltg,
yes, i like this double meaning, matching the picture you posted with the poem :)
LTG 发表评论于
yy,
i didn't mean "watercolors" :)
the line break creates that "double meaning" ...
影云 发表评论于
LTG’s version is very nice!!!
for the water color or watercolor part, i need to reread :)
《Re-ligion》
one night
at the edge
of the great
water
colors loud
as raging monsoon
in a girl's bosom
starlitness
inflamed
and i
became re-
ligious
looking
at the blue
dome of my
church
my temple
my clan-
house
:2/27/05
