《A Lady in Pajamas on the Second Floor Balcony》

2022-06-24 09:12:39

《A Lady in Pajamas on the Second Floor Balcony》

btwn two identical days
white and bright
the night
dark and tight
a cat
black and wild
fm the deep jumps out
sliding a parabola
and lands in front of me
walking
a summer morning

CBA7 发表评论于 2022-06-26 19:54:23

I know. I was asking if one of my three guesses about the cat is right? What does the cat stand for? Thanks.

忒忒绿 发表评论于 2022-06-26 10:56:02

回复 'CBA7' 的评论 : haha, the code stays between the lines:))

CBA7 发表评论于 2022-06-25 22:16:35

What a nice and mysterious piece! The lady is "me" or the cat? Or, the cat just means the emotion jumps out from inside me when I see the lady? What's the right code? :) Thanks.

《读诗》 (2022-03-02 06:45:33)
—- 忒绿

读着
你的诗
它们是那么短
又是那么长
明明是读完了
总觉得还没有读完
忽然间，看见
心里的密码
亮了

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