Half light, half shadow Half light, half shadow printed on my espresso Light is bitter and shadow is sweet Half shadow, half light printed on my let-go kite Shadow is shallow and light is deep
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Like (12) Likes: Sand Singer, kaye, Jonathan Moya, Netra Gautam, Manizd, Awesomax, DMLane, Poetry for Jane, Under the Rainbow, MargrietVries, The bravest fall, Ilovesatorugojo Netra Gautam - This poem is a beautiful reflection of the human experience. Your mastery of language and ability to capture the essence of life is truly remarkable. Your words are a source of comfort and inspiration. 6 hours ago Busy - I see what you mean that light is a better experience than the dark. But still the dark has to be understood and mapped. Modernism is full of the dark emotion. Such as understanding of the various nothingnesses. All our emotions mean a lot. Amazing! Sep 9 Alexisinwv - I love the contrast! It really completes the poem! Keep writing poetry! Sep 9 kaye - Amazing words in their energy. The feeling to this is a signature of art in letting your craft guide the ink. Congratulations on fpp. Sep 9 Under the Rainbow - Lovely words and easy reading Sep 9 The bravest fall - Interesting thoughts about shadows. I like the "Light is bitter and shadow sweet." Nicely penned. Sep 9 Awesomax - I like this! Jul 9 |