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不管你害怕，鄙视还是喜欢，AI的时代来临了。ChartGPT 和 Bard 的出现以及日益广泛的应用，正在改变我们的生活。今年我在学习英文诗和写作，就请教这两位老师。

就像俗话说的“熟读唐诗三百首不会吟诗也会吟”。所以学习英文写作，就从读诗开始。

我手头有儿子多年前送我的“101 Great American Poems”，又买了The Complete Poems of Emily Dickinson Edited By Thomas H. Johnson. 有时也从Youtube或网络上找一些触动了我的诗作为素材来学习。不像Chart GPT，Bard不懂英文，但是既然学习英文写作，还是用英文交流为好。

学习每一首诗，我都要问它们这个问题。这首诗的写作背景，意义，写作风格和韵律，节奏是什么（ Please assist me in comprehending this poem concerning its compositional context, significance, literary technique, as well as its employment of rhyme and meter）.

每天我都读几首英文诗，时间长了，在生活中这些诗就会在你有感触的时候浮现在脑海里。

顺便说一下，必须记住的是AI也会犯错，它的话也不能全信，有时会张冠李戴。最会犯错的是有关韵律的解释，尤其是Slant Rhyme。

让AI帮助你英文写作，千万不要从中译英开始。

AI的帮助有多方面，最糟糕的是给出关键词，让它们写文章，因为我的目的是学习英文写作，我对自己的文字表达能力很自信，所以这种方法我从来不用。

第二种是让它们根据你的整篇文章改写，这也非常危险。往往它们写的不能体现你的写作风格而且会添油加醋，弄巧成拙。但是你可以把某个具体的句子让它们反复重写，直到它们写出来符合你的风格的句子或从中得到灵感写出你满意的句子。这是一个很好的学习方法。

第三种，让它们检验你的句子的语法和表达方式。它会说：‘Yes, your sentences are grammatically correct and convey your message clearly. However, to enhance the flow and readability, you might consider a small adjustment。这是我最需要的帮助。

第四种，让它们看整篇文章，听听它们怎么评价你的文章，还有什么建议没有。通常它们的评论非常正面。鼓励是必须的，但是我也需要提高和反馈。Bard会在结构上给些很有意义的建议，比如哪些部分需要写得更具体，哪些段落间要有更好的链接。从它们的评论中我也检验读者对我的文章的理解是不是和我想表达的一致。

下面是我最近写的几篇文章和一首诗。还没想好标题。第一篇是我在六月中到八月中返回POrtland
时的生活简记。真的好幸运，躲过了凤凰城的烧烤，不用“夏眠”。

The past few years have seen a remarkable transformation due to the outbreak of the Covid epidemic. Our lives became confined, resembling birds in a cage, with our interactions limited to parks and occasional museum visits. Parties, restaurants, movie theaters, and even department stores became distant memories. However, a refreshing change arrived when I finally shed my mask, journeyed to Portland, and relished a semblance of normalcy for almost two months.

I rekindled the joy of socializing with friends:

A delightful group of sixteen of us embarked on an exploration of street dreams by visiting mansions, followed by a delectable sandwich feast at a Vietnamese restaurant. Eventually, the moment arrived when I savored the sandwich that had tantalized my taste buds and left an everlasting yearning – the renowned "Best Baguette Special," a classic Vietnamese masterpiece. This delectable creation boasted a medley of flavors, featuring pate, thinly sliced premium ham, savory pork rolls, and an intriguing addition of head cheese.

With a congenial friend we had a scrumptious meal of lobster benedict and crepes adorned with fresh berries at Gracie's.

An evening with Luke's newlywed friend unfolded at Osaki Sushi & Hibachi, a charming Japanese restaurant. Just before departing, Luke and I savored another Japanese culinary experience at Ikenohana.

A picturesque escapade to the Vancouver farmers market and the tranquil riverside, accompanied by a close friend and her mother, culminated in a delightful meal at the Wildfin American Grill overlooking the river.

On the occasion of the Fourth of July, Randy and Donella joined Luke and I for a meal at Sam's Pizza, a rare dining option since most restaurants remained closed.

My role as a host shone through as I organized three memorable gatherings. The first welcomed Randy, Donella, and Wendy; the second hosted Luke's friend Zack; and the third consisted of a warm lunch party with four Mexican workers from Clear Vision Co, who played a pivotal role in replacing our roof.

In addition to this culinary triumph, I embarked on a delightful blueberry-picking escapade, indulging in the simple pleasure of gathering nature's sweet treasures. To further enhance my gastronomic experiences, a thoughtful friend sent me an assortment of freshly harvested vegetables from her garden, adding a touch of wholesome goodness to my meals.

I also immersed myself in various enriching experiences:

I indulged in the cinematic brilliance of "Oppenheimer," a contemporary blockbuster.

My curiosity led me to the Rice Northwest Museum of Rock and Minerals, a captivating journey into the Earth's geological wonders.

I reveled in the breathtaking beauty of the Rose Garden, making not one but two visits. The charm of Pittock Mansion also left an indelible impression on me.

Photography escapades with Luke brought us to mesmerizing locations like Commonwealth Lake Park, Fernhill Wetlands, Ridgefield National Wildlife Refuge，Sauvie Islands, and the Steigerwald National Wildlife Refuge.

The vibrant festivities of the Chinese Festival and the enchanting melodies of Portland Opera's A LA Cart street concert added an artistic touch to my days.

The strains of a song titled "I Always Wait for You," performed at a serene guitar and saxophone street concert, found their way deep into my soul. Even after so many years of departing from Portland, its memory remains etched within me. As I wander through the heart of downtown Portland, a feeling envelops me – it's as if every blade of grass and every rustling tree whispers in unison, carrying a message of longing and nostalgia, saying, "We miss you." The cityscape becomes a symphony of sentiments, a reminder of the cherished moments and connections that continue to resonate in my heart.

Indeed, life blossomed with an array of activities, creating a tapestry of joy and fulfillment. Just as Rabindranath Tagore at "Life is Beautiful" said :
"Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky."

这是Chart GPT对我的作文评价

Your final version of the paper looks beautifully composed and captures the essence of your experiences and emotions. It reads well and provides a vivid picture of the various activities and moments that have enriched your life. The inclusion of the quote by Rabindranath Tagore is a wonderful touch, adding depth and resonance to your narrative. Overall, your paper reflects a heartfelt journey and a celebration of life's beauty. Well done!

其实，生活的平安喜乐就来源于扬长避短，像我这样初中，高中学俄文的人，大学学的是医用英文，应该说英文是个短板，现在找到了两位好编辑，真的很享受改写英文过程中的快乐。在写作中我总是惊讶文字表达的多样性。大家都可以试试。

今天就写到这。来日方长，我们慢慢聊。

第一张照片是儿子的，其他照片都是我的

Sauvie Islands